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Edit: I made some change in the face, thank for the sincere comments!


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Art by Jonatan Domínguez – WarF
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Oh lord this is hard... Five Point Critique Coming Up

- The character stands out from the background. Unless it's meant to have that painted look it looks like they are from two separate worlds which detracts a bit.

- The glove is torn but it's a bit too clean around the tears and what not.

- The highlights on the leg, you're better off with out them

+ The colour is amazing. Better than some pros. Slap some words and numbers on this and it'd be an amazing volume cover.

- The sky, compared to EVERYTHING else, looks poorly done, still good but, poorly done. The lighting is also inconsistent with a cloudy day.

Ratings (out of 10. 10 means you are a master. 6 is the highest I give out usually. It's easier to go from 1-6 than from 6-7)


Construction: 9/10 There are almost no errors with construction here. I remove one point because looking REALLY closely the eyes seem a but off but I had to try hard.
Line Art 7/10 if manga 10/10 if anime. I split the ratings because if the image were solely line art and tone, I feel like the line art does not do enough to convey depth and what not but, its still very good. If it were in an animu it'd be 10/10. There are no flaws.
Colour: 8/10. Aside from the minor issues i mentioned, there is no fault with colour here. Gives it an almost realistic look. That is almost a bad thing in someways as when you start doing real good colour, little hints of it being manga star to work against you. As it did form Katsura with I''s volume covers. Still, if I didn't take this into account 10/10.


Originality: 3/10. There's nothing original about what's being done here persay. It's just done very well.
Impact: 8/10. It makes me feel bad about my art. Is that good enough for impact.

Overall: 8/10. I honestly can't give any other score to this. I reserve 9 and 10 for more unconventional and original things. This being said on technique alone it's a 10/10.

In the star ratings. Originality is a duplicate of vision... Impact a duplicate of Technique
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Pumo-Torbernite Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She looks really hot! *¬*
Akemura Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
ZAUKHES Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pero que hermosa Taliiiiii! ^^
Otra obra de arte hermano, dibuja más seguido XD
multielementmage Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
Que pasó warf?! TRAICIONASTE AL SAI MANOSEANDO TU DIBUJO CON PS! deberías estar MUY avergonzado!
Muy bueno el fondo, y me gusta mucho como te quedó la mano... no puedo dejar de ver como se le encarnan los parlantes en las tetas XD
j-warf Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Jajajajaj lo tuve que usar para retocar los ladrillos para que no se notaran tanto las pinceladas n_nU
multielementmage Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
KissSh0t Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Some really great work.. especially with the background.. makes me think of Half-Life 2 for some reason..
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